It sure would make writing this more entertaining, and reading it would be much more fun too. Maybe the rock-star lifestyle would be fun, but I don’t want to live that life and a girl that’s looking for that is not for me.I could tell you about all the exotic cities and expensive hotels I’ve stayed at while being on tour. While my story might be Rolling Stone worthy, I do work hard, pay my bills, enjoy the company of my friends & family …I fully don’t expect you to message me, I guess if I was getting 20 or 30 messages a day from people I wouldn’t have to.Unfortunately real, honest guys like me often get passed over because we don’t stand out among the hundreds on here trying to find a date by auto-blasting e-mails they have stored up on a hard drive.The end result would be a profile that read like a good article or book jacket instead of a dating ad, and when someone reached the end of it, they’d want to read more and contact the person.As e-Cyrano’s founder, Evan Marc Katz, likes to say, “It’s simply our job to capture you, like a cameraman taking a photo.” So, why not revamp online dating profile? Then, figure out and write down what’s 2) Like with any writing, “show don’t tell,” and the more specific, the better. Evan is a big believer in “redefining the adjective.” Meaning, if you think you’re “funny” and state that you’re killing it in your stand-up comedy class, you write the funniest messages in birthday cards and you make everyone at work laugh, that’s OK.
After a while, all the profiles sound the same, full of similar clichés and adjectives.
Good Generic Example #1 Let’s face it, I don’t live the life of a rock-star or famous athlete …
but those guys are always getting caught cheating on their wives, so why would I want to live that life?
It’s like tax season for accountants -- only I work on romantic relationships rather than relationships with the IRS (for good reason). The dream of summer is a distant twinkle in your eye.
But when you think about it, this spike makes total sense. And the blanket you’re under is big enough for two.
while enjoying myself like I was a rock-star on tour.